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Re: Astray
September... I was lost… like a leaf feels Right, you can personify this without using 'like a leaf feels' because realistically - leaves don't have feelings so we'll never know. ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Whenever Forever Will Be - Chapter One ( Part Two)
Yes I do know what you mean and I think I will try that it sounds like a really good idea, thank you :D x
Nov 28, 2009 -
Re: Whenever Forever Will Be - Chapter One ( Part Two)
Chapter One Continued... I tiptoed into the assembly hall, weary of my surroundings. The hall was buzzing with noise, eager new pupils looking around as scared as I was. I ...
Nov 27, 2009 -
Re: Love Song
Prologue I stared into his ocean blue eyes, the a pair unlike any on earth. I loved his eyes, they were the picture of gorgeous. You could walk around, and ...
Nov 27, 2009 -
Re: Hiya :)
No idea, probably the geordies. Yeah she is really good, they're quite emotional stories but I finish them in a day then feel a bit scammed almost haha! Aha, yes ...
Nov 27, 2009 -
Re: Hiya :)
Hey JD! Unfortunately I don't live in the most desirable place in England - It's the least. We're all nicknamed 'smoggies' due to the pollution in the Victorian era - ...
Nov 26, 2009 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Oo, I love reading real-life stories like that but I usually write romance stories but hopefully not in the cliché 'everything has a happy ending' kind of way, I try ...
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: Whenever Forever Will Be - Chapter One (Part 1)
Hi, I'm glad you enjoyed it :) but yes the main character is a girl and she's talking to a girl as well who's just a bit stuck up - ...
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: Cutting Death
I started this story and have not finished it yet. Tell me what you think about it so far. Thanks The blood whose blood? spilled into the monster’s mouth. The ...
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: Whenever Forever Will Be - Chapter One (Part 1)
Hiya, thanks for the replies :) I'll go through it an correct the errors as well. Butttt I couldn't reveal what happened in Africa as each chapter begins with a ...
Nov 25, 2009 -
Re: Whenever Forever Will Be - Chapter One (Part 1)
Chapter One Chin Up Solider. The hot sun leaked down from the heavens, toasting our skin as we lay in the long, lush grass with our hands entwined around each ...
Nov 24, 2009 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hi Amy, I'm new as well and feel the same as you - I barely ever let anyone read my writing, yet I get quite offended that although all of ...
Nov 24, 2009 -
Re: Hiya :)
Oo hello! :) I know, it's scary isn't it?! And i haven't looked at the groups yet, but i will do - thanks! No I don't write my own songs ...
Nov 24, 2009 -
Re: Hiya :)
Thanks for the replies :) Well, I love romance but I read mostly teen books by Sarra Manning/Sarah Dessen - but I love Dorian Gray and Pride and Prejudice which ...
Nov 24, 2009 -
Re: The first page of a story.
This is one of the first pieces i've wrote..Bit sci-fi.. i didnt know where it was leading so i stopped. I tried to Do it from a male point of ...
Nov 24, 2009
