Amaryllis

Lol I know how you feel with the in love with your best friend thing, I've had the same situation for quite awhile now. Nice to get to know you!

Ok, I read through the whole thing, and I have a couple things to say. I sorta liked it, but it didn't really seem like it had a direct plot ...

Maybe try to start another story to take your mind off it, and then go back to it later. Anything that's fresh and new would be a good change (I ...

Thanks! This was kind of a personal poem for me to post on an online forum, but I'm glad I did. It at least helped things get off my chest ...

You conveyed the emotion well, but it did just sound like another random emo poem. If you went into depth more on what caused the pain, it would be better. ...

I wish it could have been different This wasn't supposed to happen, Not this way. You saw me kissing her, And not a him, I didn't mean you to. I ...

It intrigued me in an odd sort of "This is bizarre but I think I like it?" sort of way. It is definitely one of the more random things I've ...

My characters have established a permanent and somewhat irritating residence in my head, but they don't change my personality. They ramble and talk and bother me when I'm supposed to ...

Ok, first of all, my most copious apologies for the no posting before 2 reviews rule!! *bows for forgiveness* I scurried off right after I read this and made two ...

Overall, I liked it, but here are some things I noticed: But I knew this would coome That you may leave this place and our memoried here Tod fade and ...

I really like the content of it; it reminds me of when I go through my own old notebooks and remember things from my past. One random thing I noticed, ...

Hey! I'm Ryllie. I like to write about nature too, and I like poetry! Nice to meet you!

Heyas and welcome! Call me Ryllie. I'm new here too! I think we'll both like it here though. yay!

Hello all, I'm Amaryllis. Call me Ryllie, Amy, whatever you like. I'm new to YWS, obviously, and I'm hoping to get to know some other writers who are just as ...