Amaryllis

It was...interesting. But I think it would be better and easier to read, as stated above, if it wasn't all in caps lock. Some spacing would be nice too, so ...

No, they are too flipping creepy. Is it possible to run a successful sugar business at night?

Ryllie, You enjoy torturing me, don't you. You better make some sort of plot advancement that fixes my Dad, otherwise I will make it hell in your head. And I ...

I'm probably going to get around to posting my story eventually, I started typing it up yesterday actually. I'm going to have to take it off here by March though ...

I finally have an idea for a new novel, which makes me quite happy. :) I tried NaNo this year and stopped halfway through because I was too busy, and ...

You know you're a writer when you have ink all over your hands and it's not even seven in the morning yet.

Thanks for reading it! I'm glad you liked it!

Callie McCoy 28 year old woman, long red hair. Loud and friendly, owns three cats. She was raised only by her mother, who is a vain business tycoon (she hates ...

Time runs ever faster past the eyes Of those who do not grace its presence here So obsessed with money, greed and lies That when time runs out they begin ...

I liked it, though it could use improvement. It was thought-provoking. I'm assuming you were talking about either a volcano erupting or a nuclear blast, I couldn't really tell the ...

That was cute! I liked it! Jesse I love you like whoa, so please don't ever go. If you did I would cry, I would drop dead and die, [s]and ...

Hi! I'm Amaryllis. You can call me Ryllie(pronounced like Riley), Amy, Lizzy, anything you like. Okay, ten random facts about me. Here we go. 1. I love to write sci-fi ...

That's good that there's a conflict in part 2, but to make people want to read part two in the first place, some of the conflict should be introduced in ...

I am warning you beforehand that the protagonist is a Mary Sue, the plot is exceedingly boring, and you will probably drool on and mangle this book before long.

That's good to know, I was worrying about that too. I want my writing critiqued, but I also want to publish it.