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Re: Ignorance Is Bliss: Prologue
*Prologue* Lauren Travolt stared down at the can of ravioli. Her children didn’t know it was the last one, the last food of any sort they would have for a ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
7/10. Huh. I like that. It's thought-provoking. "He did a wild sort of pocket-searching dance, but to no avail."
Jan 4, 2010 -
Re: Shay's Blu (Prologue)
This is intriguing, and I find I like it so far. You characterized Shay very well, though Cora is still somewhat vague to me. I am anxious to see what ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Who's ready for NaNoWriMo?
I absolutely can't wait...I need another story to be different than the one I'm working on now for a change of pace...and boy, do I have an idea!
Sep 1, 2009 -
Re: Who's ready for NaNoWriMo?
I'm so excited for it, I wish it was November!!! Curse you, summer. This shall be the year that I finish! I hope. I just hate being so busy during ...
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: Oranges
I agree that it didn't have much meaning, it was just kind of a flippant thing I wrote back when I was in middle school. But I thought it was ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: Oranges
A tangy citrus flavor it has Colored with an orange pizazz Found only in semitropical places A bowl of them can brighten blank spaces With one bite the orange bursts ...
Jun 23, 2009 -
Re: Humor
I like sprinkling humor occasionally in my stories, I find when I'm reading it lightens the stress the reader has for a moment (which is nice because my story's a ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: Looking For A Partner
I'm willing to co-author with someone. I do sci-fi or fantasy primarily, but I'm also open to any other type of fiction (except horror, I'm no good at it and ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: At what age did you start writing and
I started writing in 1st grade, when I had learned how, and my first story was this: Once there was a zebra named Sarah. She had some rocks. The rocks ...
Jun 22, 2009 -
Re: Can You Feel What I Feel
I like this, it's pretty. Just some technical stuff... Can you feel my sadness Slowly sneaking under the huge doors That block hell from heaven Blocks should be block. That ...
Jun 21, 2009 -
Re: Miis
Another good one is tektek.org's Dream Gaia Avatar maker, I use it for my characters. They have a lot of options. I've done it with Miis also, however.
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: A.I.R.
Thank you for catching all my grammatical missteps and reading it...I write it longhand and then edit it as I type, but I am bound to miss things. I typed ...
May 29, 2009 -
Re: A.I.R.
“Today marks the one year anniversary of the debut of the Amazing Winged Man...” Violet McAdler blinked as she heard the Riverstone, Illinois local news station’s first story, its words ...
May 27, 2009 -
Re: Fast
In an odd sort of cynical way, I like this. It appealed to the social critic in me. I like the message it sends, I believe it also. Just some ...
May 26, 2009
