Amaryllis

Thank you for the replies, guys! I'm glad you both like it, and I'm happy to see such a nice response to it (this is the third and last draft ...

"Today marks the one year anniversary of the debut of the Amazing Winged Man..." Violet McAdler blinked as she heard the Riverstone, Illinois local news station's first story, its words ...

I liked this. It's all swooshy and smooth sounding. The only problem I had with it was this: although the large, uncommon words sounded nice, I also found myself going ...

Hiya. I haven't been on here in ages, but I am reviving myself to be here. :)I missed YWS.

I enjoyed that very much! Just a couple of comments... Where you capitalize AS or IN is a cool effect, but since you use both, it doesn't seem as as ...

It does make it a lot easier to know history; I just took AP US History last year and it ate my brain, so hopefully that will make my history-making-up ...

Thanks for reading! For the political mumbo-jumbo... My reasoning for that is that this is a different universe than ours. You'll find out later that there has been a plot ...

I shall review this in purple! Falling in love with a human being was the biggest mistake Yuiko ever made. The wizard and medium, Daisuke Kurosaki, a man from a ...

Twelve years later Karla knew that she was surrounded by idiots, and had been for twelve years. She was glad she had not become one of them, though she had ...

I shall review this in blue. Deeper into the dark corners of head I wandered, and Athena’s face popped into my mind. What was it that made her so irresistible ...

If this is a fantasy trilogy, shouldn't this be in the fantasy section...? I shall review this in blue. The sunlight shone with a strange magnificence, turning the grey frost ...

Wow! Thank you so much! That was the most epic review of my life, and it made me smile! I'm glad you liked it so much.

Karla- "That doctor man's voice! It was disgusting!" Charlotte- "Bland, flavorless oatmeal. Ewwww." Quincy- "Couldn't tell you. I have eaten the same thing every day I have lived. The oatmeal ...

Omigosh I like this. It's short, but it ends with a sort of "thwack" sound. It sticks in your mind.

Yay! Thank you for reading it! As it was first coming out of my head (I write everything longhand before I type it), I thought that it was really bad, ...