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Re: Weak Tears Under the blackest of Skies (2)
It was interesting and I enjoyed reading it. It is very descriptive, almost too descriptive that it's taking away from the actual story and there are a few mistakes like ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: Aurora - The Beginning
I remember. I remember the day it all began. It was unbelievable. It was astonishing. It was terrifying. I remember the day as if it was yesterday. It started in ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: The Amulet In The Forest (1 of 2)
It's a really good story. It's creative, the characters have personality and you really establish what they are like in the story so far. The writing was dramatic, with the ...
Nov 8, 2011 -
Re: Heroes and Demons (Chapter 1)
It's really interesting and the idea is really good but i have to agree that the very beginning needs something to really capture your reader's attention and get them interested ...
Nov 8, 2011