Alzora

Hi!! Alzora here to edit/review! I believe he is chosen. Do you mean "I believe he is the chosen one ."? Wil interrupted, “Well, there is no use arguing about ...

Hi Snoink!! I'm new on this website and haven't yet gotten to read/edit any of you're works! I've heard they're awesome! So, here we go! the water heater was busted ...

"Ellie, I let it on your bed." She said, a slight annoyed tone in her voice. "Ellie, I laid it on your bed." She said in a slightly annoyed tone ...

awww your puppy is so cute and you are so pretty! Thanks!! You're so pretty too!! :D

Hi, new person here. Here's my pic... (YOU GUYS ARE ALL SO PRETTY!!!) This is a pic of me and my puppy

This is awesome!! I loved it, there's only one thing that I saw was wrong... Unfortunately for him, I had good hearing. this seems a little awkward. But other than ...

Wow, Hi. I'm Tanya. Welcome to YWS! I was going to do a review but I just saw the format of your chapter. First of all, it is a very ...

That was strange, it had a some little parts that were wrong. You might want to proof-read and then edit. Other than that though it was great!! Alzora

This is a story I'm writing for a local short-story competition. Please criticize as much as possible!! The Tears of Battle I sprang into the fight, wildly swinging my sword ...

I wrote this in detention of all places (for my cell phone, and it's the only time I've ever been.), and this was written in annoyance to the two girls ...

Last year for English we had to write a poem based on the Love Song Of J. Alfred Profrock. This is mine, so I didn't write SOME of the lines ...

I just kind of randomly came up with this, very spur-of-the moment. Enjoy! The clock chimed two. I closed my eyes, groaning. Why did the moon have to be so ...

*Dream* "Matt! Matt please don't leave. Please." Amy Lynn pleaded with her boyfriend. She didn't want Matt to leave her, but he had to. It was for the sake of ...

“Screech!” screech shouldn't be in "'s The ear-splitting sound of mutilated metal and shattering glass reverberated throughout the estate, causing anyone within a few miles of the road to turn ...

Chapters 3, 4 and 5 for my novel Invisibles. Reviews please :D . Chapter 3: Blood is Thicker Than Water When I got to the house I parked the cart ...