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I am interested to see where this goes, but I do think that the abundance of description was a bit much. Don't get me wrong; it was well done, but ...

Reading through here, I didn't find any nitpicks, so I will just tell you what I thought about it. I find the way you have started this story very intriguing. ...

In my opinion, there are two books that tie for the title of worst book ever. Space Trap by Monica Hughes, and Luke Baldwin's Vow by Morley Callaghan. I had ...

I think that everyone else has covered the typos etc., so I am just going to tell you what I thought. This was very well written. The descriptions were amazing! ...