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Re: Because I'm a Christian
Love. Love. Love. That is all... well, not quite. I love the fact that it isn't completely polished. It makes this feel so much more real. While having a poem ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Meant to Be (part 2 of 3)
Here is the next section of my short story, Meant to Be. I have to hand it in on Friday, so all reviews are greatly appreciated. If you haven't read ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Patchy
Hey Flower - This is the review that you requested in my WRFF thread. I'm sorry it took so long for me to get this done... Anyway, this is about ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: A Review for You! And you, and you, too.
theotherone - Your review is finished. I hope it was helpful, but if anything was unclear, feel free to ask me! Flower~Child - I will put your poem on my ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: We all knew it
Hi! Here is the review that you requested! There is a lot of emotion in this poem. You clearly conveyed the image of a relationship that spirals out of control. ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: Report A Site Bug
When I try to log into my WriterFeed Pad, it doesn't recognize that I'm a YWS member... Any idea why? I used to be able to access it.
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: A Review for You! And you, and you, too.
I would be glad to review your poem! I will try to get it done some time this weekend. :)
Apr 22, 2011 -
Re: Dear Sweet Listener chapter 1
Hi there! I'll start by saying that this has a lot of potential, and I am curious as to what comes next. I don't think it is rubbish by any ...
Apr 21, 2011 -
Re: Why hello there
Hey SkyeLiam, and welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy your time here. If you have any questions, feel free to PM me or ask a mod (anyone with a ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [4]
10/10 Awwwwww...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Meant to Be (part 1 of 3)
Before I begin, I should probably tell you why this short story is being told in three parts. I am writing this as a project for my English class, but ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: Ramblings
Today's poem is a haiku. Cheap? Maybe. Awesome? You know it. 9: Laughter fills the hall, Children running, singing rhymes On summer's first day.
Apr 15, 2011 -
Re: Ramblings
Yes, I know I missed yesterday... I will try to get caught up later. But I really wasn't going to come on here at 10:30 last night to put my ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Ramblings
7: Time It is among the most precious of commodities, And yet, It is the most easily squandered. It is strange to think That time could suddenly run out, That ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: Outside, Inside
Hey idraax! This poem reminds me a lot of how I write a lot of the time. I find that my inspiration changes drastically when I write outside from when ...
Apr 10, 2011