AlyKat

hahahahah that was the best commercial ever!!! And i would've liked it better if you had what he said after he licked it off the guys finger.... Mmmmmm cheese =)

I flipping love it!!!! He creates his characters wonderfully and makes the book seem to come alive!! Dustfinger is the best character of course =) He also creates the problems ...

If you like all of those you should try cryptid hunters and the second one Tentacles. There's a lot of action and im sure you'd love it =) Also try ...

The entire Bloody Jack series!!! It has everything a person could want Action, romance drama its amazingly wonderful and i recommend it to anyone i meet =)

I love it!But it truly seems a little awkward...When you start of with the writing it confuses me a little but i do love the concept of the poem and ...

Fish in the pond swim so free Birds in the sky fly with glee Spring has come and all animals stir From the mouse in the corner To the horse ...

I love these =) I love to feel emotion from pieces when i read and i got that when i was reading Awesome job =)

Hiyaz =) Im Aly and I'll review =) I like color so any mistakes i find will be in color The shambler gently rocked, almost lulling me to sleep, but ...

I love to read and have read ever book in my school library....But a REALLY good series is the Bloody Jack series by L.A Meyer it's a long series but ...

Oh small child of mine do you hear, The old stories of that one musketeer? How he fought and battled his way in war. And how the tales he told ...

Hiyaz =D Im Aly and im gonna review this for you =) Ok color code! Red-Indent (I'll put the first word that should start a new paragraph in red) Blue-Misspell ...

This is awesome!!!! So many people could relate to it and i think with a good beat this could be wonderful!!! And if you get it published I call first ...

I lovee your first sentence but It bit down hard on its bottom lip, My first thought was, what is it? I absolutley love your description in the first paragraph ...

Little fish in the pond swimming so free The birds in the sky flying with glee Spring has come and all animals come out For even the rat will come ...

I've marked in red what needs to be capitalized and put what should be the first sentence of a new paragraph in blue. I'll put any other corrections in green. ...