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AlyKat

  • Narrative Poetry Re: Farm

    Haha thanks :)

    Sep 20, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Running From the Devil

    Ok so I'm going to be really honest... This is so beast!!! But yeah I'm gonna try and find what few mistakes you have. ANything I change will be in ...

    Sep 20, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Farm

    Spring has come and all animals stir, the old calico is now shedding her fur. Her kittens all tumble and play, while the donkey just stands and brays. Mother duck ...

    Sep 20, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Town

    Hi :D I'm Aly so I'll be reviewing for you today For, when that old and crotchety excuse for a religious leader comes about to inspect the Town and its ...

    Jul 21, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Diary of Anne Frank Retold

    Well if this was a story about a girl in a concentration camp or POW camp you would be right but it isn't. And my grand parents watched mass murders ...

    Jul 1, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Diary of Anne Frank Retold

    December 15, 1940 Dear Sugarcane, Hello my dear diary. Ok, so yeah I know how tacky that sounds but papa told me if I was to write in you I ...

    Jun 18, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Holocaust of the Future

    It will be longer as soon as I have the time to put more onlinee!!!!

    May 13, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Holocaust of the Future

    The blast surprises all of us at work and many on break. We have five seconds to acknowledge the attack before the warehouse is filled completely with smoke. The smell ...

    May 13, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Mummy's Little Bear

    I love this story! The characters are a little plain but i love it!! It may seem strange that these two things should be together, after all, for Mothers to ...

    May 13, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Blue Pain

    I love your emotion in this!! Two softly painted parallel lines painted continuously. Try taking the second painted out or put a semi-colon. Now I’m drowning in that pool, it’s ...

    May 13, 2011
  • Media Reviews Re: I love this book but....

    A great and terrible beauty....I LOVE the story line...But in the last book bad stuff happens to the characters, people die and its so sad!! But the big thing wrong ...

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Media Reviews Re: Amazing Books

    Maximum Ride is amazing!!!!!!! Good book choice!!!!!!

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Media Reviews Re: Any good books I can try?

    Any book by Roland Smith!!! Or the Bloody Jack series by L.A Meyer (it sounds weird but its amazing)!!

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Media Reviews Re: Books you loved more than the movie...

    Harry Potter!!! And the Percy Jackson series...They totally killed my like for it all when the movie came out

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Media Reviews Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read

    Ohh my word....Found by Margaret Haddix We had to read it for battle of the books and the first chapter is horrid plus the characters bore me and the story ...

    Mar 1, 2011


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