AlyKat

I really like the emotion you out into this :) To be honest I really can't comment that much. The insanity that was caused that day (excuse this) really sucked. ...

I don't usually enjoy reading fantasy but I really enjoyed this!!! Any changes i make will be in the beastly color blue ;)) Lance ran through the woods, the Garak ...

Hi :DD I really like this :)) Any changes I make will be in the freaking beast color blue ;) Yeah, I’m stuck in these ancient, reeking catacombs . B ...

I really really like this!!!! Any changes i make (suggest) will be in the freaking beast color blue!!! At some time, at some place in this immiscible world, what mixed ...

I love this!!!!!!! Any changes I make (suggest) will be in the freaking beast color of blue It was the year 1984. Michael Jackson had just won eight Grammy Awards ...

Ok I do agree with the others you could make this a little longer!!! But I'll just fix grammar and spelling mistakes. Anything I change will be in blue "Renee! ...

I really like this and I think if you fix the mistakes it could a freaking awesome story!!!! Any changes I make (suggest) will be in the awesome color blue ...

I like the emotion in this. The main character is very well thought out and i like the whole concept of the 9/11 setting. Any changes I make (suggest) are ...

I just want to say that I really love the idea that this is how someone is made INTO a hell hound. I mean if you do write more i ...

Ok you're my new best friend :) I love when i find someone who writes the same emotion and type of pain I do. It's amazing

Ok so you're an amazing writer. I say that because this caught my attention enough that i turned the T.V off just to read :) Anything i make (suggest) a ...

Ok so I'm absolutely in love with the concept and and emotion that comes with this piece. It's amazing!! Any changes i make (SUGGEST!!) will be in blue Many stories, ...

Ok so I just want to start this out in the way that I love it!!! And i totally get it. A lot of my writing I don't get how ...

Love is like a mighty phoenix. It blossoms till fully grown, then is burnt to ashes. Only to be re-born, to die once again....

I love the story line to this. I'm currently in school so I can't comment to much but I will when i get home. I will read all of it ...