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Fallon sighs in disappointment and disapproval as I deal the cards. Two other demons, both dark-haired and dead-eyed, eyeing me up suspiciously. I'm a known cheat when it comes to ...

Hello Torripoppy! I really like the idea you have here for this story, it's very intriguing and it certainly hooked me in. I admire how your story creates such a ...

I really like you poem and its insightful approach to someone buried deep in their thoughts. I especially like the symbolism and similes you used throughout the entire poem. It ...

Hello, ExtremeFreakShow!! I think this is a very good piece of writing in its unique quality, and I especially admired your use of rough simile in the "my throat a ...

I personally think this is a very insightful and detailed story :) It's really good, in my opinion, and there's nothing to improve where grammar and punctuality are concerned, and ...

I won't let them beat me. Not yet. I'm relentless, no one can overcome me. Psycho-analysis treatment is nothing compared to what I've put up with the last few years. ...