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Re: A Flash Fiction
This was pretty attention grabbing I must admit. I like how you made it feel normal. I really like that in science fiction when the author is able to generate ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: Gone [prologue]
Star dotted skies are awaiting me back home. There are wide grasslands and beautiful flowers that throw their scent into the breeze , too . I have two wonderful parents ...
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: The Chronograph
They were dead. They were all dead. His hands shook, making the printout all but impossible to read. What had he done? What will he do? Will should be would. ...
Jul 4, 2009 -
Re: S.c.r.a.t.c.h.
SCRATCH macaroni “Must… Keep… Running.” The boy might not have even realised he said it aloud, but he did. In a manner often seen in free-runners, the boy hurdled himself ...
Oct 16, 2008 -
Re: {Edited version of untitled story, suggestions welcome}
The wind picked up, and the fuzz flew around the whole land, [s]falling[/s] to soon grow again. The petals came next, then the leaves. It has a nice imagery to ...
Jul 17, 2008 -
Re: The Quest for the Amulet of Destiny
[s]Back[/s] downstairs Amarie cho[s]o[/s]se a round table close to the massive fire place. Early spring still brought a chill to the nights of Chevara so a fire was blazing in ...
Jun 20, 2008 -
Re: The Quest for the Amulet of Destiny
The bow and arrows strapped across her back gave her courage. She could decapitate any advisary within mere seconds with the short sword sheathed in a leather scabbard at her ...
Jun 20, 2008 -
Re: Fruit
It was only eight in the morning. New light filled my box of a kitchen, and even with the window open all I could smell was coffee and cigarettes and ...
Jun 20, 2008 -
Re: Tangled Up In Blue
Tom is overweight, has a thick moustache and a burly nose. He walks with a certain sense of pride and arrogance, but he doesn’t have anything to be proud about. ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: Tangled Up In Blue
I slept [s]in[/s] on the couch most of the time and even when we boinked, I ended up sleeping in the living room. I spent most of my days watching ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: Tangled Up In Blue
The family is having dinner in the living room, their eyes all fixed upon the television in front of them as they munch [s]up[/s] on the stale chicken. There is ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: Fairytales Don't Exist
“Well, I can rant later on.” She crawled onto her two feet, her pink dress following her movements. The edges of her garb held a torn appearance, and the point ...
Jun 19, 2008 -
Re: On End
My back began to ache as I sat up[s],[/s] and [s]I[/s] ran my hand through my knotty, unbrushed hair. I yawned, eying the board I was napping on; it was ...
Jun 18, 2008 -
Re: Other Side of the Looking Glass (Chapter 1)
Chapter 1 The Black Mansion “Hurry up!” Karro could hear her Grandfather call from ahead of her. She kept walking at the same lackadaisical pace she had been for the ...
Jun 14, 2008 -
Re: Machinations #5
Nikola clenched his jaw and tears committed suicide off of the bridge of his nose. That was a brilliant description. I thought this was much better than number four as ...
Jun 10, 2008
