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Alteran

  • Art & Photography Re: Your basic art thread

    Waffle girl is uber cool. I think the hand holding the notepad isn't quite right though. I would have liked the blush to b aibt more blended. Other than that ...

    Aug 6, 2007
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Claudestine

    All was quiet in the mountainous town; the only sound were from the sky—the chirping of passing hawks, Hawks dont really chirp the rustle of the wind as it brushed ...

    Aug 6, 2007
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Elder's Secret (Removed)

    *removed*

    Aug 6, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Kat's Art! (updated 09/25/07)

    I love the First one. It's a cartoon, not a portrait. The only thing that bugged me was Hunter's leg. The second one is bloody brilliant. I love the person ...

    Aug 6, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Estora, Succubus

    How demonic. I like it very much. I have a hard time with her legs. I dont think they would be that thick, even though they are...goat's legs.?

    Aug 6, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: My abstracts and book covers.

    I love the first one. the repeating pattern and the boldness of the colours os great. The second one is cool, but I think you could use a bit more ...

    Aug 5, 2007
  • Other Poetry Re: light

    I enjoyed it. Easy to understand and reads with ease. I agree it needs a bit more emotion. Light and Dark is like the oldest conflict on earth, so your ...

    Aug 5, 2007
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Accused

    “There are crowds of people all around, shouting, clamor, ten thousand face s , ten thousand eyes—you have to bear it all, but the main thing is the thought: ‘there’s ...

    Aug 5, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Paperscraps and such

    Yes...uh,erm...yeah. Anyway... First guy is missing a few parts. His neck is to far to the left. The right side of his face is to big as well, doesn't match ...

    Aug 5, 2007
  • Archive Re: The New and Improved Twisted and Completely Out There Story

    "Woah, now!" said Greg. He moved hastily closer to his wife, "Ring my friend." Sara blushed a little. Derby, however, was not pleased. His face contorted in all manner of ...

    Aug 5, 2007
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Do TV and Movies Inspire your Writing?

    Indeed, The best part is when I reread my stuff and see how this thing got mixed with that and this and that thing too. Then I ask myself how ...

    Aug 5, 2007
  • Archive Re: Chat room adventures

    "I dont know. Keep firing. I have to run a sensor sweep." Adam was terrified. What if they had gotten to th outpost already. Surely something as advanced as an ...

    Aug 5, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Your basic art thread

    I liked her a great deal. The description on the side was nicely done as well. It fills the space without making it clutteres. Her eyes bothered me a bit ...

    Aug 5, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Clound n' Flowers

    I like the idea, having clouds as a backdrop to flowers but it needs to be a bit more clean. The short green steam and leaf in the lower left ...

    Aug 5, 2007
  • Art & Photography Re: Your basic art thread

    I love the teddy bear! Other than the Shoulders he looks great. Nice work.

    Aug 4, 2007


That awkward moment when you jump out a window because your friend jumped out a window, then you remember that your other friend can fly.
— Rick Riordan, The Ship of the Dead