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Re: Clau's Contest: Chinese Fairy Tale [for crits]
The Six Dumbest Brothers Based off the Chinese fairy tale Once upon a time in a far, far, far away land—there lived an emperor with a pearl. The land was ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: The Shadows of My Past
File 1, Part 1 "Here," Jack Harlington, the infamous "Black Jack" hunter and my boss, said as he slid a box towards me. It's big, brown, and has the name ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: The New and Improved Twisted and Completely Out There Story
Greg flew towards Derby, Sara clenching to his arm. there was a sudden flash and he was gone. Greg hovered in mid air. There was no sign of Peter or ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: Usergroup Wars: Return to YWS
Adam wandered along the corridors of YWS. Something very odd was happening. There was a lot of progression going on, very uncharacteristic of authors. Procrastination...where is it!? He stared out ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: My Random Drawings
They are all very good. Your details are superb. I do suggst working on your human proprotions. The ones you have are fair but with a little practice they could ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: Usergroup Wars: Return to YWS
"SPEW is already nearing completion of its first few ships," said Imp. "The Belias is ready for Combat though," said Ares, "As are its Fighters." "But do we really want ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: Chat room adventures
"I need you to be ready and willing to give it your all. The situation has become far worse than expected." "Are you going to tell us who he is?" ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: Your basic art thread
Lily is really good. A few points, I like the freckles but thought there should be fewer. Her wand sould be a bit more cylinder shaped, not so pointed at ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: Menagerie - character concepts
Lovely! The first image is very well drawn. The colouring is great andthe use of the girls as a frame is quite brilliant. The centaur is very well drawn. You ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: Chat room adventures
The com cracked with static, "Highwind to Outpost, Do you copy!" there was a click. "Hello, Highwind." "Thank the gods, is the Outpost alright?" "It's in one piece. Though, if ...
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: Wint'ry
Very nice. Simple and elagant. Perhaps I'll use it when winter comes along. I really liked the snowflakes.
Aug 8, 2007 -
Re: Writing Habits
Music, I wirte best with music blasting in my ears. Blocks out everything else. I've kinda gotten into the habit of writing at my computer now. I used to hand ...
Aug 7, 2007 -
Re: Galactic Ranger GR-8D (FanFic of Ratchet, UYA)
Brought to you on Behalf of the CCF, we apologize for the delay. Note: Not edited whatsoever. A terrible read I know, but I'd like suggestions. Planning on editing soon. ...
Aug 7, 2007 -
Re: Chat room adventures
Adam dashed down to the main core. He did his usal keystrokes and rerouted some power. Just enough to send a message to the Outpost. Another dash and Adam reachd ...
Aug 6, 2007 -
Re: Usergroup Wars: Return to YWS
Adam followed the AI done a few hidden halls. Each on hidden by a hologram. "Use this transporter," said the AI, "It will take you to the Godfather." Adam jumped ...
Aug 6, 2007
