Alteran

Name Colin Gregory Banks Story The Order of Atlantis: Rise of the Shadows Gender Male Species Human/Psionic Description Brown Hair, one Blue eye and one pink eye. Slender build with ...

It has a good technical aspect but as far as composition it's lacking. I'm glad you figured out a new effect but you might want to try and find a ...

PLotting is a useful tool. In fact you can even look at the first draft of your story as the plotline. You can always use the main plot and then ...

Part 4: Interrogation Dynecus was giving himself a clumsy haircut with his knife, succeeding in making himself look even more like a criminal, though at least not himself. He was ...

*removed*

It may have just been me but from 1:32 to 1:48 eastern time on friday I couldn't get on.

This takes me back, Way back actually. Funny how things happen and work out.

Adam sat at the Hufflepuff table, at least three seats between him and any of the other Hufflepuffs. Jerks.... He could see Alzz walking over to the Slytherin table. He ...

"We've all had that moment," sighed Greg, "hopefully you end up better than we have." "Meh," she put her foot all the way down on the gas, no one seemed ...

Is it just me or did Snoink review count take a hit? I think this could drag on a while.

Adam stayed awake long after everyone went to bed, he was trying to deal with being betrayed by his friends. At least you still have Alzz and the others. He ...

Adam closed his potions book and stared down at the essay. It looked passable. The uses of Fire Seeds. The dormitory door opened and some of his fellow second years ...

"Of course! I can smell bad stink a mile away. And he's covered in it." How anyone could look past the darkness in Garret's heart was beyond him. With a ...

The Path effect is nice but it's not strong enough against so many trees. It looks too busy. The second is a bit dark and it looks like a busted ...

Adam was trying to sleep in his quarters when he heard it, the soft thumps of feet on the cream coloured carpet. With a quick motion Adam shined a light ...