Alteran

Colin watched her speed away, feeling a little uncomfortalbe being left with the thief and the demon. He tryed to check the monkey's truthfulness but was being blocked, no doubt ...

This is brilliant! I love the shading, the pose, the dool is so sweet. It truely embodies all those toys you forgot. I feel like it's saying, "Play with me..."

I think it matches the atmosphere of the scene well. I thought her dress should be a little more form fitting, and her pose a little more fluidic and odd, ...

Colin did a fast sweep of the monkeyish creatures mind and saw the tree explode after he touched the elephant. There was a unified felling of fear as Amelia struggled ...

Colin peered into the remaing tree, wondering what could have casued an explosion like that. Then, with a thud, a small creature fell to the ground. "Wha ya do tha ...

Adam tugged at his bindings, weak and cold. What is going on? What was that thing? So many questions and a large lack of answers. Someone...Alice? Bella? Matt? Nutty? He ...

I enjoyed it. I kinda thought the whole he was there and then he was gone was a bit cliche but their personalities seem genuine and unique, At least against ...

Adam held his breath as the shuttle landed in the SPEW Yard. Landing gear creaked against the weight of the shuttle. "This is recon, We dont want to start firing ...

Colin brushed the dust from his white robe. The hem was torn where he had crashed into the roof. "Urr, Hi." "Umm, How did you survive that?" asked the partially ...

Adam slid behind a tapestry and down a hidden corridor. He found himself on the second floor. "Time for some minor vengence. a little Befuddlement Draught should make those jerks ...

"Peter is causing all sorts of trouble, he'll most likely be waiting in one of the old temples." Alexx said, " "I where our new powers are?" Owen pondered. Nearly ...

I think this is more of romantic fiction than lyrics. Moved

Adam clutched his chest, trying to stay hidden and quiet while he caught his breath. Stealiing ingrediants was no easy task. Lucky for him Alice and Calder had caught the ...

Colin peered around the corner of the building. The city was dark, filled with monsters. A woman was speaking quickly to another. Her cloak hid her face, but Colin could ...

I did a great long crit and now it's vanished so yeah. The characters seemed well developed. You have little description, We dont know what your characters really look like ...