Alteran

I love Amy Lee, her voice is sweet and I love their songs. Lithium is my favorite, followed by Weight of the World. They're not all depressing, ya know. Just ...

Part of being a writer is learning to accept criticisim. You cant expect others to cater to your emotional needs. This is nicely written, but when you get published and ...

Adam giggled, the voice was telling him exactly what to do. Wandless magic wasn't very powerful, but it was enough to accomplish his goal. "Kate, how did you get in ...

I enjoyed it very much. It took me a while to see Rebeccah as the sort of neutral party. Hse kinda seemed to flow between whoever was closest. She didn't ...

And some of them get ignored for good reason, better to say nothing at all than something rude. The thought is well placed, Kitty.

Adam tiptoed quietly up to the Hufflepuff dorms, potion in hand. The Common room was rather empty and his fellow classmates were already in bed. He took out a jug ...

Well....This is more of a raondomness topic, and it's really just stupid. Nothing struck me as funny, more like 26 ways to get into trouble.

It looks pretty cool. I think you need some more shading to increase the look of depth. It looks kinda flat right now. Her face is very well done.

Adam opened his eyes, looking at the cave walls. The ability to struggle was gone and he no longer knew how long he had been there. The bite seemed to ...

Adam listened to his bubbling potion, soon it would be ready. Soon he would have his revenge. Though after the nights events, his wants were unimportant. Soon....soon.... The words echoed ...

*cries* But but but....she was brilliant! "In my dreams, I never have an age," she said. "I never write for any age group in mind. ... When you underestimate your ...

*removed*

Colin eyed him, He'd seen magic before. Nothing like this, but all his encounteres were far from pleasent. "So, is your magic dark?" Colin asked, keeping eye contact. "Excuse me?" ...

While your little thingy there makes sense, you must also understand that some people need to complain, it's a form of therapy. Having another person empathize with your situation helps ...

Adam was careful to not be heard as he placed his ear on the staf room door, various voices echoed within. "He was imperioused, Professor!" argued Hagrid, "No one his ...