Alteran

I like this very much, the flower is a great center for the picture. It's pure white colouring makes it look illuminated and adds to a truely awe inspiring effect. ...

That's pretty cool. You make him much more evil looking than the games do. He just looked fat and dumpy in them. Nice work.

YWS is so hot. Not actually hot as in temperture, but....oh you know. Rock on Nate!

Adam wandered the empty halls of the Highwind. The air seemed stall, unhealty even. What is going on? His crew was no where to be found, the computer wsa non ...

"They can't get rid of me, foolish girl. Trying to use old magic. They dont know wht old magic is." Adam rose from the ground, a malicous glint in his ...

It's not bad, a little info dumped, but you set it up like that. I personally perfer to be introduced the characters and let them reveal the world they live ...

Not as menacing as i thought he would be, but still well done. They're all very stylish, i think once you get the graphic novel going they will all blend ...

Chapter I: Sanctuary Zane rolled his way down the sloping streets of Ashville Hill. The dark canopy of leaves rustled in the night breeze, sheltering him from the slightest glimpse ...

Looks very nice, I like how the fire pops out and makes the two figures stand out as well. The second person's head is too dark to see, but it's ...

Well, I guess I'll pick my own route then. Adam wondered what it all meant, then the screen flashed again, the lights of the Highwind dimmed and turned red. "Warning, ...

Adam trembled on the ground, the voice was bellowing in his ear, telling him exactly what to do, but he fought. "Get out get out! I dont want to! No ...

How wonderful! the CCF song is perfect. You know us so well, CL. :)

Colin had the urge to look into Griff's mind for answers, but couldn't. he agreed when entering the Order to never look into someone's mind without their permission. Not that ...

Interesting. Would have been a nasty shock if somone found you all electrocuted though. That would have been like a suicide note or something. Glad your better sense took hold ...

Firya is very well done. Trefele, however looks very boyish. The neck seems bit thick and her jawline is very defined. Overall though they both look good and are very ...