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Alteran

  • Art & Photography Re: One of my drawing things

    Awesome paint work. I know you mentioned the hair already, all I think you need to do is lower the hair line on the side where the hand is on ...

    Jan 9, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Distant Intimacy

    I sense a lot of emotion in this, it can be better expressed. The thing that jumps at me first is that you need to capitalize your i's. Believe it ...

    Jan 6, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Anything Really: The Final Chapter

    I'm so sad, I loved everyone too..... And now they're dead.

    Aug 29, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Dancing With Danger~EDITED

    I like your description of the event, however I think you need to ditch the spoiler thing. If you think it needs to be rated higher than do it in ...

    Aug 29, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: New Model

    It's been a while since I posted anything. Thought I'd put up a new model I did of Atlantis. Comments welcome.

    Aug 9, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Coming out of the closet

    Lurker! We love lurkers. But Welcome GuntaFX. Really cool Avvie by the way. This definitely the right place to come. I might be a bit biased, but seriously. When I ...

    Jul 15, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hey everyone

    Hi! I love playing online games too! You should let me know what you play sometime, perhaps we can play together on something. But yes, welcome to YWS, so glad ...

    Jul 15, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Ultamite Chapter 5: Questions

    I awoke in shock. The room was quiet as I examined it with curiosity. From what I could tell I was a in log cabin. In fact everything was made ...

    Jul 4, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: What are you looking for?

    When you log onto an authors website, what exactly is it you're looking for? What draws you to their site and what do you want to be there. I personally ...

    Jul 2, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Background Check Center

    Okay, I did some research on Tate and from other authors who have dealt with them, they send you a contract and want you to invest. In other words, It's ...

    Jun 30, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Another Addition

    Awesome! Have you ever read any of the Fanfictions by me or Griffinkeeper. You should look up some stories about the SPEW Gryphon. Your art piece there fits it well.

    Jun 21, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Hi!

    Hi! Velcome to our vonderful little site. We're not vampires, I promise. But seriously, so glad you decided to come on board with us. Everyone is super nice and if ...

    Jun 21, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: A Learning Affair part 4

    This is picking up after the 'my opinion' comment in the library. I hope you enjoy! “Whatever, Jane,” I shrugged. “Fine, you enjoy it when Mr. Jones has his way ...

    Jun 20, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: really bad....

    Everyone has pretty much given good advice. You have a sense of perception that just needs some training. I suggest looking for a book called "Drawing on the Right Side ...

    Jun 19, 2010
  • Research Re: Time Travel Survey

    1. Where would you travel to? I would time travel to Ancient Greece 2. Would you time travel for vacation? Nope 3. Would you ever consider moving, and living the ...

    Jun 19, 2010


If you ever find yourself in the wrong story, leave.
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