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Very interesting. I've been fighting with the college because they keep putting my major as english when i'm saying C-R-E-A-T-I-V-E W-R-I-T-I-N-G. Stupid college. But i think i'll change to Video ...

I absolutely love this. Eat the jeans and try on the hamburgers was pure brilliance! A few rypos that i'm sure you'll find with a quick read through. Absolutely beautiful. ...

We're doing poetry and personal narratives right now. I am not a poet at all. I'm terrible at it. Thanks guys. I know the people in my class will just ...

In my creative writing class my teacher wants us to pick some works that we didn't do and i just wanted to aske you guys if i could use some ...

Well...never really thought about it before but i think it's my setting and the constant conflict. Of course Rowling's is a modern day fantasy like mine but i'm not as ...

Well I agree it is definatly an infdump, as Snoink said, and not a good thing. But the prolouge isn't a bad thing. My suggestion is to write your novel ...

If i could live anywhere it would be Greece. Anywhere in Greece. I love it there. *sigh*

Well I knew it wouldn't be for everyone. It's not really a faith in humanity. It's more of an inevitability. We're going to forced together anyway so i hought we ...

Well i just wanted to make an announcment but in the process i'm posting our mission state which was a magnificent suggestion from DD. the Announcement: We have a new ...

We have 2 members! i didn't think i would even get that.

This is impossible! A sting ray! No freakin way! if anything was going to get him it was gonna be a crocidile not a bloody sting ray. I smell something ...

Well. This is the last chapter i'll be posting on YWS. The novel is finished but i should stop now and work on agents and such...ugh... But if anyone really ...

I'm pretty much going all the time. whenever i can write i do. not lately cause of college and stuff but usually i write all the time. Headphones and music. ...

Welcome to this lovely place. I'm sure you will be a wonderful addition to the society. Ready to help whenever ya need it. Happy writing!

This is how i crit. I'm gonna go through the whole thing and make comments here and there. It's just easier on both of us i think. I re-wrote this ...