Alteran

I only did chapter one at the moment. Well her it goes... Of course, my parents moved her partially for me. My mom is what some people call a Mama ...

Thakns guys. Sam He was having fun because he didn't know until he saw them. I think. It's my story and i'm not totally sure but i'm prtetty sure that ...

5/10 It's a good quote but i hate it. sorry. Dan It's not stalkerish it's save the worldish.

I get a good amount but I would rather have more indepth so I can get better.

10/10 I love quotes about writing and life. I was given one by a friend that said, "The Professional writer is the amateur that didn't give up."---Unknown

Quickly disasembling his rifle, he slowly backed up from the ledge to his camp site. It was entirely hidden on the side of the hill on the outskirts of town. ...

Alice. She is the most beautiful girl on the face of the planet. Maybe even the galaxy. I always flirted in my own way. A witty comment, a tiny wink ...

I'm not sure. maybe a 5...7 tops. I see things but i can also make things move with my mind so yeah. i think it's pretty normal. --Colin If you ...

10/10 OMG that kicks total butt. Sick mullet...if it was a mullet

I am no where near that. Not even close. I would think the title would change to something else. There should be something above Speaker of the Forum. If there ...

I like your disclaimer. I've never played this game. I've played Zelda but not this one i'm afraid. You did a very good description and i saw it in my ...

I think i want to do something else and then a great idea hits me for the Order and i have to go back. Right now is kinda of a ...

Welcome fellow writer! I love your avie by the way. And i like the title of your piece but thats cause of a Final Fantasy reference in my mind. Wait ...

I don't know if that's any better but it just kinda hit me all of a sudden.

10/10!!!!!!! PUPPY!!!!!!!!! CUUUUUTE!!!!!!!!! I wish i had a puppy..... :cry: