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Granted but you also see them die Granted, but it gets eaten by SPEW. I wish I could beat the elevator puzzle in MYST III. NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wish SPEW would ...

I get the sentiment and it's sweet but in order to really push the emotion and give it power ther are a few things i would suggest doing. Firstly read ...

Probably until the end of the world but i try to contain myself. Not that I dont want to talk. after everything that's happened. and now Colin's gone...I think i ...

Granted but it never grows accustomed to you so you always get pricked when you touch it. I wish i had a kitten

I was given this pick a long time ago and she called it the brain bleedingly adorable kitten. So don't look into it's eyes. No far! it's the only one ...

ehh....what :?: 9/10 cause i like to be confused

*+* It's a koala

Granted but it melts before it hits the ground thus becoming rain. I wish I had a cake

It's hard for me cause i have a hard time with short things. Usually i give the bare minum details of a setting to get that basis so the readers ...

The town was rather empty; the light was fading after a fresh, spring day. The street lamps were beginning to ignite, one by one they would come on, burning orange. ...

9/10 the blank stare of Nessy(Right?) Pretty neato.

I would die to protect Atlantis. It's the best home I've ever had and I wont sit back and let something happen to it! --Colin Banks Is there a special ...

Granted, but ther is hair and teeth in it and ewe...I wont even tell you what that is. I wish I had a superpower!

I have no more to add to Claudette's Crit. I agree about the commas. There are to many and it can get confusing. I love the morales. This would be ...

Alarms still blaring in the distance, he shifted his pack into a comfortable position and started sneaking his way over the rest of the hill. He had to get out ...