Alteran

Sunny weather. I guess Alice would count too since can channel all sorts of solar powers like fire and light. --Colin Banks-- What is the most interesting place you've been?

before i grant this wish allow me to congratulate Jenna on a wicked BURN!! Granted but it gets eaten by SPEW! I wish i had an agent

The first paragraph shows that you have thought it through which is good but i want to see more. This paragraph is nice but the real question is: D oes ...

Thanks for the comments. Im trying to take the view point of no one read the first book so i'm working on introducing the characters all over again. I'm not ...

9/10 Classic dragon. Admire them, I do.

Firstly, You have got to format thhis so it is easeier to read cause all the sentences cramped together like that is murder on my eyes. And i wanted to ...

This was nicely written Snoink. You playted the emtion without making it corney so good job. The onlything i didn't care for was the first paragraph. It didn't really grab ...

Chapter 1 Just Another Day “Come on,” whispered a slender young man to his friend. They went silently across the foggy docks of New York City. Their white robes trailing ...

A story huh...let me see let me story for you! Come back, One Year!!!

uhh? what? --Chris Akira-- I concur --Alice Johnson-- Indeed --Colin Banks-- If you could do something terrible to your worst enemy what would it be?

I would like a chat that doesn't need to high of a internet speed cause i never get to talk to anyone.

Granted but she said.....NO! I wish the skull SPEW coughed up would reanimate into the kitten i had before SPEW ate it

His duty was to never be completed. In his haze of blood loss and desire for the lady held beyond his reach by magic and stone, the dragon flew up ...

I write down randome words sometimes and rearrange the letters until i like the way it sounds and sometimes my chracters are born in my mind and it's all there.

Depends i geuss...Like a treasure chest or ... ya know....upper area. I like treasure chests and as for the other comment. --Chris Akira-- Geez Chris what a wuss. It's nothing ...