Alteran

This is kinda of odd. I liked it but I didn't like where it is. I kinda dont understand why this is in this place. It's like a character sketch ...

To get to the other side, aduuh! How big are your nostrils?

Granted, but you fail next year. Then you dont get into college and you become homeless and live in a cardboard box forever and ever. I wish my friend knew ...

If they ask for the polar bear to be killed then they should ask for every animal in captivity recieving artifivial sustinence to be killed. No more zoos. And if ...

Granted, it is *drum roll* Listening to the emo song until the sun rises. AHAHAHAHAHA!!! I wish I had a cool superpower

granted but your mean all the time and lose all your friends. I wish there were more people in the WCA

Granted now stink like skunk I wish I had a job

"Why does everyone keep dieing?" --Colin Banks Do you like Chocolate?

Sometimes i like them but i dont use them. I think They're good if the story really needs background info for the eader to understand whats happening.

That's sad. You wrote this so very well and you start reading and get pulld in before you even know it. Great job. :)

I think it's freakin hysterical. Teh cow and Muhammad! Oh couldn't hold it in and then the games and the crusades! OMG that was too much. I love you. I ...

I loves it!! I want to frame it in my house! Seriously though it was good and bravo on haveing the courage to tackle such a terribly volitile consept.

Cool map! I think I need to brush up on your chracters :)

It's a good why of introduceing. Though you could just have this being the opening of the first chapter. It's a great way to draw in the readers. I think ...

Never! Why would I bring anyone back to this hellhole? - Berello Sweetie, I deal in Death. - Arriva Would give your life to save another?