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Greg readied himself. He could handle the power but it took more concentration. More meditation. Everyone was running around prepareing but how can you reall prepare for this? The battle ...

Kay I haven't seen you in forever :) Welcome back even though I didn't know you were gone :D

Welcome! We promise not to bite....hard anyway. But seriously. Enjoy the YWS. P.S. Emo Carebear that is awesome :)

Imelda, I know that you're not saying what you're saying to be mean but some of your crit is a bit unnedded. For one thing this is the fantasy forum, ...

Holy Crap! I dont believe it. What a surprise!. Very good. Very few errors. Mostly missing words. Not a big deal. I'm a bit lazy but there real easy to ...

Adam returns to normal. Well, what he assumes to be normal. "To the Temple" he shouts and points his finger dramatically in the direction of the large stone structure.

Nice, Cant wait to see its textures :)

I like it and i dont think it's flimsy. I did wonder if this was the same person from Ch. 1 talking though. I dont think it is. The distaste ...

"Nice to see you too, self." said Greg mockingly. He walked straight to the old man and placed a hand on him. "Wait for me," he said to Sara before ...

The goblins turn to dust as Adam passes them. The light from his metal wings is incenerating them. Matt is sweeping through the forest. The goblins are being mowed down ...

Adam sees hundreds of goblins headed his way. "I'm coming Guys!!!!" Adam enters Seraph Mode. He becomes a robitic angel like creature and Zooms into the forest plowing the goblins ...

Well Griff, I did some minor adjustments and things so everything would work okay(It gave me a bit of a fit but nothing I couldn't deal with) and got it ...

Adams ball of light joins the fight as well. With Adam controlling it he smacks the goblin a bit. Then five more appear! and they look Mad!

"Good grief...." Adam Mummbles to Scruffle who agress with a determinate koo. "I AM AT THE TEMPLE." Adam sends a ball of light high into the sky. It pulses and ...

Well I'm a bit confused but here goes. Owen's plan as crazy but it had to be done. It was all they had left. Sara was sleeping, twitching a little ...