Alteran

Your computer is either resizing them automatically or your diemensions match those of the pictures or are higher. There is avery nice and easy program called IrfanView that i use ...

Greg flew quietly across the cityscape. The night offered a pleasent cloak for him to do what he needed. His skin had started to turn grey. Small crakcs had formed ...

Gah! cliff hanger! I think you can comvine the two chapter easily. I like the first person view too. It keeps me in touch with each character. And the characters ...

But if you switch points of view in a chapter you can use the * * * Screen break.

That was really good. Depressing like kill myself depressing but ever so good. I liked that you refered to the two men as Macho-man and henchmen. a very nice wy ...

Becuase Writing and Publishing is so competative and risky when a Great bok of one genere comes out other publishers dont want to compete with it. Really retarded but they ...

Adam wanders down th hall now tha his bug bomb has dissapted. It's a bit dark but maybe there is something cool down below.

Her voice was so sweet. Even if it was just his imagination. A young teenage girl was headed home from school. She took a shortcut. It was her last mistake. ...

Well I'm sure many of you have said, "It's called the adventures of the Gryphon but where is the Gryphon?" So here it is! A money shot and a side ...

Great. It's really hard to write these days cause it's either a cliche or a copy or crap..... *sorry that was a rant. I'm a "contemporary fantasy" writer and at ...

Adam openes his bag and pulls out the fabled "Bug Bomb" "Everyone get out of the door!" He throws it down the hall and the green fumes of Spider poison ...

That was great. So blunt and out in the open. Argueing always leads to great makeup....stuff. The one thing i was bothered by was i thought Quinn had just been ...

The SPEW Peregrine. Captain: Jennafina This is also the Raptor Class explorer vessel. The Peregrine is a bit more advanced with SPEW technology but the Raptors will run at anywhere ...

Adam spins his Weapon so it makes a loud whistle that seems to daze the spider monsters. "It wont work for long, kill a bunch of them!"

Adam Dashed for the transporter. He had to stop them from using....Fred. He placed his hand on the steel wall. An error message appeared: "Your comment is either to complex ...