Alteran

8/10 I like the red against the black and white picture.

The girls scampered to a terminal and activated the communication. Bella stood with the broken android as the repair technicians looked it over. "This better be good," said Nate. "We ...

Greg banged agaisnt sara's blocks with all his might. She was to strong. He sighed and lifted his head up. There was nothing but silence now. Then Matt cried from ...

I live them. Not crazy about the first one cause the angle you choose draws the eye up but the up of the picture is destablized and out of focus. ...

Such is the power of perception, Muse. The camera angle is straight on and his arms are bent so the forearm is straight forward. His arms aren't to short they ...

"I think we need to check out the High Council's chambers." said Alles. Ileria was no longer being dragged. She simply walked beside him. "Why?" "There might be a clue ...

They crried the Heavy Android into the YWs main Office. Adam force Bella to make an Invisible spell on them so no one would see the Android. They entered the ...

Merged those two They look cool. Didn't expect that colour or the apple but it looks sweet. :D

"Thank the Goddess," said Alles when he saw Emily. "Guys, this is Rick," said Emily. Rick owed awkwardly before saying hi. "We need to know," Ileria said, "Where it is ...

"Slow down," said Owen, "did she leave a note?" "Yeah," Greg showed them her note. "Where could she have gone. I cant sense her i cant track her." Greg sat ...

Adam slings Jay into the brig and activates the Holding Field before returning to normal. He then turns to Matt. "What the hell is wrong with you! You smashed an ...

Woot! Aerial looks cool! A much beter face job. not lopsided or anything. Her waist seemed a bit tiny to me. Jasmine is a bit scary....Her lack of mouth makes ...

Nice use of colored pencil and regular pencil. Dobnt see that combination much. His expression is nice and the detail of the clothes is superb. A little nitpicky but the ...

This was done well. And because of the size of the pic I think posting them in seperate threads was a good move. You did a very nice job on ...

It looks very nice. I'm not crazy about the left leg. It looks to fluid for the stance. I would think it to be more hard and rigid. good job.