Alteran

Searing pain shot across Adam's brain. "AHHHH!!!!" What was happening. Where was it coming from!? "Adam!" cried Bella. She rushed to him as he fell to the floor, unconcious. Those ...

“Honey… are you sure you want to go?” “Yes, I ar’dy told you!” The adorable girl had her jaw stuck out in [s]the[/s] perfect measure of her stubbornness. Her mother ...

Well, great. My crit is gone so I'm just gonna give you advice now. Descriptions. Your's are great. really Brilliant. I just suggest trimming them a bit. Make your words ...

Quinn is hysterical and sacry all at once. I love the way she toyed with Jacob. It was brilliant. And when you said Alex got kicked in his manhood that ...

I get it, but i agree it's a bit unstructured. I like the mystery but i think our mystery man would organize his thoughts better if he was trying to ...

Greg's soul stared after Hannah. He knew what to do. They appeared At Alexx and Owen's house. Sara uncorked the Bottle and Greg's soul returned to his body. his eyes ...

I can see you've done the wet clothes effect and it looks great. I think after you Colour it things will be uber sweet. And now they're pretty sweet anyway. ...

"Perhaps you should tell her so," Adam said, "Come on. The fact that you got to atlantis in one piece is a miracle. Let's leave before they get even more ...

O_O They're looking at me! *pokes Monkey* It's MR. Manga Angel Spirit really cool and creepy and just a tad bit nightmarish. Good job :D

Great job. You are way consistent in your drawings. A very good thing. This one is sweet and I love the wings being out and more visiable.

I'm afraid of the top left. Looks Demonic. I lilke the placement of the oictures and i agree with Jenna about the word placement. Not ideal. It makes it look ...

Meh. Sorry but it wasn't much to me either. I liked it and it was nice but it's been done. A bit repetitive and your flow stumbles quite often. No ...

Chapter Three: End of Innocence “What… What have I done?” Kai looked at his bloody, clawed hand in horror. “How could I do such a thing?” He began to feel ...

Chapter two: When I got home “Why hadn’t Jacob come?” I asked myself when I was sure that he Is this Jacob or someone else? It gets confusing when you ...

The Judge read the contract over a few times before looking back at Adam. "It says that during times of crisis you are to be exempt from all criminal charges. ...