Alteran

"That Jay, Isn't the real Jay," Adam said. Everyone's jaws hit the floor. "But what about all this trouble!?" yelled Bella. "We are located in Sector 1408. It is a ...

It's very nice. A bit random though. Kinda confused but it looks great :) I love the little people. They're so adorable.

10 points will get you a low quality critique . Err, I'd change that. I can understand what you're saying but no-one should ever give a 'low quality' critique. Maybe ...

Poor Stirly....Make your self who ever you want to be! Make a grown up Kitty Stirly!

It's not that they're not connecting, it's that it doesn't look natural. It looks stiff and odd. See how the guy's arm is just a little bent, That kind of ...

First photo is very nice. I love the sceen. It adds a little texture to the entire photo. The foot prints are a great detail. they help dray the eue ...

The guy looks great. The girl however is a bit off. it's her arm. Her forearm and upper arm are not connecting correctly. It might help if her arm was ...

I like it. The sky really makes it pop out. I think you could have fun photoshopping it. There are a number of things that could be done with it. ...

I thought the feet fine. The leg bothered me most. It seems off. The floe from the knee to the foot makes it look like your leg is broken a ...

"Dont touch me," Greg scowled, "Your filth is difficult to clean." Alexx and Owen were at their feet ready to fight. "Please, I have no intention of destroying you today." ...

"Not anymore..."Alles pondered. "We should leave this place," said Rick, "We're not safe." "Of course we're not," said Ileria, "We have the Princess. All Manner of darkness will be after ...

"Damn," Adam looked at the moniter. Alice would die if they didn't get out of here soon. "Sector 1408 will take another hour to exit," the computer chimed. "Guys, Try ...

"They could be promising," said Greg as he watched from the building top. "The girl is so powerful...She just needs a bit of pushing." "You cant just start abducting people," ...

Adam wandered to the Bridge. What was going on. that Jay...didn't seem quite right. "Computer, What sector of space are we in?" "We are currnetly traveling through sector gamma 1408." ...

I really like he tree thingy. And your creatures are wonderful. I would like to see them in colour but as far as line art goes absolutely great.