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Hello, anyone in YWS? No one commented. I'm hurt.

UNDER CONSTRUCTION. (You can still leave a comment if you want to.) Untitled I'll tell you about a place that I have known Where the wind blows all night. Where ...

Hi! I've got the exact same comment as MKate: Hi, ehte92 I really enjoyed this poem, it felt deep and pure somehow, and I loved how you gave such a ...

I'm glad you're not depressed! :o As far as the poem goes, I think it holds a lot of potential! I mean, your character essentially watching someone die from cancer. ...

It rhymes, but it is very simple; I think it can be improved further. Allow me to explain: Poetry is all about painting a picture with words. The goal is ...

Hi! A really great poem! My only comment is about this line: Good books, Bad books, Books that are inbetween Putting 'in-between' kind of broke the rhythm. I guess you ...

You, my friend, make me laugh. Laugh, laugh and laugh. Same here! I totally love this poem, it put a smile on my face!

Wow, I finished reading it yesterday! I agree to what you have said, the ending was kind of unsatisfying and I wondered about the same questions. I never knew that ...

I suggest you read Abandon by Meg Cabot (when it comes out in Spring 2011 ). It's based on the myth of Persephone and Hades. Reading it might help you...

Hi! In The Mediator series, by Meg Cabot, Suze's brothers swear a lot. For example,in book three, Jake says, " What a freakin' jerk." Then Suze thinks " ...Only he ...

Hey! This exercise I perform nearly every day. This is what to do: First write down a list of verbs, nouns, etc., as many as possible on a piece of ...

Endangered Species An endangered species is a group of animals or plants that are in danger of being wiped out. Most endangered species have about a few thousands of their ...

Wow.. I have an (almost) exact same list....though I had a few scientific wishes (e.g. find the secret of anti-matter or see visit the other nine scrunched-up dimensions... Nice, though!

Do you think looking through a book of names for babies or something works? I heard that some people do that...

Thanks a lot, Nightgoddess!