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  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Thunder Pussy

    Super cool! Hahaha what the hell man. sounds like a few of the kids at my school My exact same thought! I really liked it, and I laughed during some ...

    Feb 18, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: the incredibal icecube

    The incredible ice cube I remember it was year 88 B.C. and I was running from the other kids in the tribe. I was running and tripped and fell on ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Warmth-Seeker

    Hi! This is amazing. I really loved it, and I almost wept when I read the ending. It's just so sad... Any way, I noticed a few nit picks, but ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Angry Valentines Day!

    I'm not very good at reviewing, so bear with me, please. That was pretty good! I really liked it! The character seemed real, and I can see why she hates ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: I Thought I Knew

    Thanks a lot! Yes, the chorus was supposed to be sad, just like you said. As for the second verse, I intentionally used the words "dream" as well as "once" ...

    Feb 16, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: I Thought I Knew

    This song I wrote in the perspective of a girl who realizes that nothing, no one in this world is innocent :shock: , including her loved ones. Hope you enjoy ...

    Feb 15, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Find Out What Grade Level You Write At

    That's cool! Though the results for my latest poem was kind of disappointing... Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 9. Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 59 Well, I'll get better with time... Thanks for ...

    Feb 11, 2011
  • Other Re: How to fling a thing mashing

    You will need: *5 things (any thingy will do!) *half a cup of bling king fling *2 teaspoons of fine crystal mashing ling What to do : 1.Boil 3 things ...

    Feb 10, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Vocab Exercise

    Hey! This exercise I perform nearly every day. This is what to do: First write down a list of verbs, nouns, etc., as many as possible on a piece of ...

    Feb 7, 2011
  • Research Archives Re: Which prison setting?

    Maybe Arkansas(don't here much from there) Yeah... I thought of that. It's pretty scary, it's where Al Capone went bonkers... Thanks for your opinion! (I also considered underground locations, but ...

    Feb 6, 2011
  • Poetry Discussion Re: "Emo" Poetry vs. Good Poetry

    *googles navel gazing* Oh.

    Feb 4, 2011
  • Poetry Discussion Re: "Emo" Poetry vs. Good Poetry

    What is "navel gazing" anyway?

    Feb 4, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: An Insight Into A Teenager's Mind

    Thanks a lot! I am a teenager, being fifteen; I'll tell you what people think about being a teen You always think you're right, and when you get it wrong; ...

    Feb 4, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Untitled

    *sigh*. Still no comments.

    Feb 3, 2011
  • Research Archives Re: Which prison setting?

    Which prison setting should I chose for a book I'm planning to write? The top security prison fits the best in: 1. An island in the Bermuda Triangle location (any ...

    Feb 3, 2011


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— Stephen King