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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Winter

    Thanks! And I don't usually, but heavily patterned poetry is something you have to learn to write at times. y'know, for creative writing class!

    Nov 12, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Winter

    For any future Reviewers: This poem is a sestina. That means I use the same six words at the end of every line for six stanzas, and then use two ...

    Nov 12, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Winter

    Haha, yes I guess that was a bit paradoxal. I did the repetition because it's a sestina! That means I use the same six words at the end of every ...

    Nov 12, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Winter

    It was a sestina, but I can understand if you didn't know what that was or didn't notice it was one. That means I use the same six words at ...

    Nov 12, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Winter

    Thanks for your review, and no, that was supposed to be nonlight. I actually didn't know sestinas were supposed to be in iambic pantameter... oops. I did try to make ...

    Nov 12, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Winter

    That means I use the same six words at the end of every line for six stanzas, and then use two of those words per line for three lines at ...

    Nov 12, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Winter

    It was a sestina, honey. That means I use the same six words at the end of every line for six stanzas, and then use two of those words per ...

    Nov 12, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Winter

    It was a sestina, honey. That means I use the same six words at the end of every line for six stanzas, and then use two of those words per ...

    Nov 12, 2013


We are all broken. That's how the light gets in.
— Ernest Hemingway