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Re: Escape with me?
Escape with me? Lets get out of here, Leave all we know, Lets go find ourselves, Come on, You know you wanna. Let's leave this boring old town, And go ...
Oct 13, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Blue; Four
Hmm Can't wait to see who it is that has will all troubled oh and I think you should keep Veronica's POV I like having both of the POVs. :]
Oct 12, 2008 -
Re: ProjeKt Oath prologue
wow pretty interesting :] I liked it the only thing that I think you should be careful of is You go from: He snaps back panting, on every part of ...
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: Broken and Forgotten
gracey; Thanks so much :] On my next poem I'll try and have more feeling my the voice grimy: Yes! i got an A+ :] Haha Its okay for repeating ...
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: Help Me
Okay so this is something I wrote a while ago Not really sure what this would go under give me your honest opinion on this please :] ------ Help Me; ...
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Blue; Three
Yey!!!!!!!!!!!! XD So will's a werewolf is he? haha well that was one of my first guesses on what he was awesome chapter
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: One Last Memory
Awh so cute I love short stories like this and yours was good better the good I think the way you discribed things fit almost perfectly with the mood of ...
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: I Will Follow You Into The Dark
Wow this was great though as a lot of people before me have stated, E.(I don't know how to spell her name sorry) isn't much like how breaking dawn set ...
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Blue; Two
I didn't like this as much as i like the preveous two but still I thought it was amazing XD
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: Midnight Blue; One
Oh! my gosh this story is awesome I love the charactors they seem so well thought out and as for Will I have 5000000 ideas what i think he is ...
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: My heart is breaking apart
wow. amazing very good wish i could write poetry like that XD
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: Broken and Forgotten
Broken Small fragments are left over From a whirlwind of pain - Forgotten No one can remember Who I am Or that I exist at all - Broken Just that ...
Oct 6, 2008 -
Re: The Werewolf's Bite
pshhxhoney: thanks so much!!! haha XD Kiss of life: thank you so muchh!!! I will write more soon and just to tell you i have chapter 1 up too XD
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: The Werewolf's Bite Chpt 1
Hey again! These sentences didn't quite flow well and you didn't transition the topics very well. First you're talking about how she's immune to blood and how rare she is ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: The Werewolf's Bite
Angel Of Death: Thank you so much! I just fixed that double negitive and I'm so glad you liked it so much XD
Oct 5, 2008