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Re: Friends?: Scene One (Edit version)
Hehe, everything makes sense now. Looks pretty good! Might want to run it through a spell checker, though.
Sep 13, 2016 -
Re: Friends?: Scene One (Edit version)
Are you writing a skit, or a story?
Sep 12, 2016 -
Re: Echoes
Hello! I'm glad you liked it! I definitely need to do some rewriting.
Sep 10, 2016 -
Re: Echoes
Oh my, all this good feedback. I can't pretend that I'm good at first person, but I didn't even notice how much I used 'When' and 'I'. I wasn't actually ...
Sep 10, 2016