Allessandre

Oh, I LOVE this. I'd make grammar points, but everyone else already did that. All I can say is this is awesome, keep writing

Alaina felt nervous as she walked toward Stephan Rolenz’s office, she knew that this man wasn’t one to cross. All she needed was to convince Stephan to answer a few ...

“Whose kits are they?” A deep voice queried “They have too much mud on them to smell a thing!” said another cat. Hawkkit moaned “Stormkit am I dreaming?” She and ...

SOrry my characters havent been on, I was banned from the computer... By the way, these clans are actually clans in my fanfic, I just was too lazy to make ...

OMG OMG OMG write. more. NOW. Suspencr is killing me Aug I wish my warriors story was this good!

This ones just as good as the. prologue, better, chptr two, here I come!

I love the warriors books! I even have my own warriors fanfictiom any way this was great, off to read chptr two!

(Larii) Stepping up to Kayla I hiss in her face "Leave the girl alone." I stop twirling the orb on my finger, and my knife dislodged itself from the wall ...

(Larii) I wouldn't do anything, Shadows Callers don't keep track of age past 14. What would you do if you could fly but if.anyone saw you you would fall?

Kittens dont open there eyes as soon as they are born, they live for a few weeks with their eyes closed, I know from experience that kittens walk around alot ...

Heres the link to chptr 1

“Is she breathing?” “Of course!” “Silvermist I don’t think shes breathing.” “Shes breathing, I know she is!” Silvermist cried “Silvermist, care for Wildkit” “I know what to do

(Larii) Looking curiosly at Vincent, "What's red wine?" He looked at me kind of funny.

(Hawkfire of BushClan) New apprentices, this us wonderful, I padded away to hunt. (Mistydawn) Placing my marketr by the tree, and climbed up the tree. Ashstar padding n, and I ...

(Mistydawn) "Of course, six lives, I had all but forgotten..." How can I make her loose six lives but still seem innocent? "Lillykit, eat the mouse now, to show other ...