AliyahPillage

I liked the poem because it describes things one thing I did notice was you wrote Out the corner of my eye. maybe putting and of between out and the ...

I loved the work because I was in the peom from the first word I just found something that didn't make much sense to me And Gived them the emphy ...

I think this is awesome, double for ryhming, something I can't do myself.

I don't know what it says but it sounds nice, I always love Italian.

It was time to leave and I didn't want to go but I knew I had to; facing school after all of the humiliation caused by my twin sister yesterday ...

I like the use of words, it's dark and shows how life can be.