AliyahPillage

I love this poems so much, it is so true for most best friends and it almost made me cry just because it's so happy and true.

I love how you used a different pattern on both sides left i added in 9,8,9,10. And on the lines on the right i did 6, 8, 6, 8 I ...

I really like this poem. One thing I did notice though was You left some footprints behind on my heart; you were the only reason of my life maybe the ...

I love the poem but I was just wondering why the I in icicles is bold and the n in land is bold unless you're trying to spell something out. ...

I love this poem, but I'd try not to use words that make people run to a dictionary, for example 'Gaia' and Lavished. Other than that I love it and ...

I love the whole poem in general but my favorite line was My thoughts don't quite sound right I don't know why, maybe it's because thoughts don't usually sound right ...

First, it dpends on what you're trying to make a point of in the poem is it war or is it peace this doesn't rhym but it might fit in ...

I loved this poem, it showed how the person felt and it made the reader (Me) feel the same way. I love how it shows the anger, if that's not ...

I loved this, the constant back and forth between two hearts, it was great. I have nothing else to say other than keep writing like this, it's amazing.

Great poem, I love that you used a haiku, I find it very hard to write haiku's but it looks like it's is easy to you.

This was great, the only thing I found If you'd only let me free I think you should stick to the title and say If you'd only set me free ...

This is one of my very first serious poems, I would like as much feedback on this as possible... I hope you enjoy. Realize Realize, shut your eyes, this battle ...

I loved this, there are a lot of descriptory words used and that makes it interesting to me keep up the good work!!

This poem grabbed me from the beginning, Now, our rose so red, is wilted and dead this was my favorite line of the whole poem, I think you should keep ...

I haven't read any of your works before but when I read this I loved it, I didn't understand the beginning that well though.