AliyahPillage

I love this poem, it tells a nice story, I love it all so I couldn't tell you which was my favorite part. Keep up the good work.

I enjoyed reading the whole poem, I'm going to say this and I don't want to sound weird but the title sort of made me think of zombies and when ...

I love this poem, the first line really caught me and kept me up until the last word, my favorite stanza was The night brings a chill, peace will be ...

This poem is AMAZING I love it, just one thing, and a short trip to the hospital for stitches . I finished white, the tube rolled up like empty toothpaste ...

I like the idea of the poem but some of it was hard to understand, 102; numbers flash too much, too much rubbing sleep from red eyes slipping on ratty ...

First off, the poem didn't make much sense to me, there were a lot of spelling mistakes for example 'another' and 'friend' are spelled wrong multiple times throughout the poem, ...

I love how you kept it short, it is a very nice poem figurative lies from figurative foxesfogging up the window to the alley and the gun this was my ...

I love this poems so much.

I love this poem so much, it kept me from the first word to the last word, my favorite line was The sun is dead. I don't know why, but ...

You can shatter me, break me, and tear me apart, but no matter what you say I'll keep coming back to you. You can put me down, push me around, ...

I love this poem, my favorite line stanza was It’s like a matchboxStruck in your chest, Yet cool like rain.On heated breath it stood out to me. Keep writing like ...

I love the poem although it's a little bit long for me to understand and stay focused on, I know poems can be any length but I had trouble staying ...

I like the poem one thing I found though It soothes your senses if you’ve worked too never falters in showing you the path this is the only stanza that ...

I like the poem other than I didn't quit understand it, maybe it's the language that was used but other than that I loved it

I like this because it's true. I have nothing else to say.