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Re: Photos of Stuff
I love the candy tree picture, it looks so awesome, I also like the picture of the water lilly.
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: You, the essence of my praise
I love this poem a lot you're a good writer.
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: complications
I love your poem but I just wanted to let you know that a lot is two words. other than that great job on your poem.
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: There Will Never Be An "Us"
I love this poem, it's AMAZING, I love all of your writing that I've read so far. Keep up the good work
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Fairytales
I love the poem, my favorite stanza was the one about diamonds in the rough, it was a great poem, keep up the good work.
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Don't tear me to pieces
I like the poem although the 'I, I'm, and I've' should be capital of the time and it's only capitalized, shreds is spelled wrong in the last stanza. how i ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Five minute play.
I like this but you went from using Collin the using Conner and that didn't make much sense. Great job other than that.
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Broken
This is a really good song, I love it, nothing else to say.
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Cynthia's Story
I love the poem, it was full of suspense and made me want to read on GREAT job.
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Finding yourself
I love the poem, it was really great, just a few pointers, That’s what it feels like when you have no control and mo meaning you spelled no wrong, there ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Snow Day
I love the poem, I especially love the line about the colorless rainbow, I don't know why that is my favorite line I guess that it doesn't make sense so ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: Anakin Skywalker
You are a amazing artist, that picture looks great.
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: The Devil's Game
I loved the poem in general. The colors didn't make much sense to me but maybe you had a point to them, my favorite part was the red in the ...
Dec 15, 2011 -
Re: My dream trip
I loved the poem,it had an amazing ending, and this is how a lot people feel like everything good is just a dream.
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: Alone in my head
I was taken aback by your words, as you turned and walked away, "don't abandon me don't leave me alone" I screamed. My heart was fractured, tears rolling down my ...
Dec 12, 2011
