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AliyahPillage

  • Lyric Poetry Re: A lost stone

    I enjoyed reading your poem, I would consider looking at your punctuation and fixing it. I am just a thrown away one this line made little sense to me, I ...

    Dec 19, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Drawing of Alice Cullen/Ashley Greene

    I love the picture, I love twilight, but to me the mouth is a little awkward, not that I could do any better but just thought I'd give a little ...

    Dec 18, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: faith

    I love this photo, it's very visual, I really enjoy the heart in the middle of the cross.

    Dec 18, 2011
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Gale-A hunger Games fanfic

    I loved the hunger games so naturally I would love this, you did a great job. I hope you keep them coming.

    Dec 18, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Innocence Untrue

    This was a very nice poem to read, I love how you have dialogue in there as well, this I find it very hard to do. She fell like a ...

    Dec 18, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Concept of Fears

    It was a very nice poem although it was very long so I had some trouble understanding and concentrating on it.

    Dec 18, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Crystal Clear

    I love this poem a lot. We tumble out of our addiction and find ourselves falling away from each other. This was my favorite stanza. Keep writing!

    Dec 18, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Eyes

    This is a great poem.

    Dec 18, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The End.

    I love the poem in general, And I ask again, What is it we’re fighting for? this was my favorite line even though I'm not sure why Keep up the ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Twilight Pictures I edited on GIMP

    these are just a few of the pictures that I've created on GIMP and there are two of my friend thrown in there that was posed but the looks so ...

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Rough Drawing

    I love this, for a rough drawing this is great.

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: At your service

    This is a great piece of art.

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Long Story Short

    I love the simplicity of the poem, it was a great poem.

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Black Marbles In Your Eyes

    That was a very nice poem to read, I was kept from the first word to the last word. Great job.

    Dec 15, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Eight Years Late

    I love this poem so much, it reminds me of my friend but not so much as it should, you did a great job on the poem. The happiest memories ...

    Dec 15, 2011


“A good book isn't written, it's rewritten.”
— Phyllis A. Whitney, Guide to Fiction Writing