Aliceinhorrorland

Thank you! I%u2019m sorry about the whole death scene, But glad you liked it. And yeah, I thought that line was a little weird to, but I didn%u2019t know how ...

Thank you! And yeah that ending would%u2019ve probably been better. Thanks for reviewing!

I think that could be cool

Yeah, description is something I have to work on ahahaha. Thank you for the kind review!

I think I might make more of a %u201Csequel%u201D for this, and base it around that plot. Thanks for the idea, I%u2019ll probably do it sometime this weekend or something. ...

Okay I might later :D

Thank youuuu! If I turn it into a longer story, I%u2019ll definitely have to work on description, thanks for the tips! And sure, let%u2019s hear your ideas

Thank you for the review!! :D And I think I was going to have her say something crazier, but then I changed it and I guess I didn%u2019t change the ...

Thank you! And yeah, I definitely have to work on describing the setting better

Ahahaha, Thanks. I didn%u2019t realize most of that to be honest. And the ending was supposed to be comediclal, cause it%u2019s definitely not sincere XD. I%u2019m going to probably rewrite ...

Thanks for this review! (Love your profile picture

Yeah, I might re write this story later on cause I didn%u2019t take much time on it. I%u2019ll let you know when I do :D

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Hey! Ima review this poem, so lets get started! I want to start off by saying that this is not, by any means, a bad poem. I just, personally, think ...

Thank you!!!! It came from within the weirdness that is my mind :D

I think it could be an interesting story, you should definitely continue 👍🏻