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AliceInWonderland

  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Vampire Ballads

    Wow... Eerie. Strangely, I love the way you kept repeating the lines, it gives a dark feeling to the poem. I do agree with your characters being a little flat, ...

    Nov 7, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: One Mistake

    Most of the times it only takes one great line for me to love a poem, one line that leaves me breathless. You had that one line ;). You are ...

    Dec 5, 2009


He began to wonder why he had felt uneasy at all. It was like a man wondering in broad daylight why a dream had appeared so terrible to him at night.
— Chinua Achebe, Things Fall Apart