AlfredSymon

Hi Samii, I really love your poem Crimson Tears. It really speaks about us people as person and not viewed as anything else. You also showed the pain in love ...

Fantasy: Wizards and witches are my favorite. I also like both reading and writing adventure stories. Historical: I like to write stories about how things came to be in a ...

Nice work! First attempt, huh? Well, it's quite unbelievable because you seem like a pro! I love you're snaps! It looked as if it came from an expert! 'The Fooling ...

A change of plans? Here's another plan, I'll comment on this piece, how's does that sound? I just want to admit that you're story is some sort of word-packed, subtle, ...

Hahaha! No I'm still sane, don't worry, I can still critique your work. Hahahahaha Ok, I'm not laughing now. I like your poem because it entails a slow-mo story. I ...

Home, sweet home, huh? Hiya this is Al, giving a Revue. About this poem: you're a great idealist because you made something which exemplifies a feeling of longing that everyone ...

Hi, Al here for a review! I like the poem 'Little Bird' in a sense that it speaks about how people today act selfish and proud, but there is nothing ...

Hi Crazed! No wonder you're works are crazy themselves ;) You're right about that girl! Where is true love these days? A few decades ago in the movie world, true ...

Hello readers! Before reading the poem, I would like to tell you thank you for lending you're time into reading this piece. If ever you liked it, please comment on ...

Hello readers! Before reading the poem, I would like to tell you thank you for lending you're time into reading this piece. If ever you liked it, please comment on ...

Bad day indeed, huh? Al here, for your Quick Critique! :D Foremost, I like your main concept because almost everyone in this site can experience this. I like the rhymes ...

Thank you everyone for commenting on my post! I really appreciate it! It's great to see people liking another's poem!

Hi Toe! I have a friend named finger! Seriously.......awkward. Death's Final Claim, you said it was inspired by another piece right? It seems that that piece is a fantasy or ...

Word games, huh? These kind of writing activities enhance writing capabilities of writers to think creatively, it is also believed to be a brain exercise because of thinking excessively. 'nuff ...

Hi Blood! Awkward.... I'm a born Sci-Fi fan (not the geek/nerd type, just fanatic) therefore including Star Wars in my reading/watching list. And I appreciate any Star Wars fan who ...