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AlfredSymon

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  • Lyric Poetry Re: Unwritten

    There're cats, now there're dogs, what kind of Pet Shop are they running here anyway? Hahaha kidding . Now, everyone has these writer's blocks y'know, and I'm proud to say ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Media Reviews Re: Books!!!!

    For starters, I think you would read Gregory McGuire and Terry Pratchett books. Almost all of their works are based on magical worlds. They're not that scary but there are ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Sun set

    Hi Hudz, it's me again! Meow I like this piece as much as your literary ones. The first one was finely captures; the clouds were just perfect that moment and ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Under the Sea

    Hello! Oh, I mean, meeehh . I didn't realize your a sheep there! What an adorable drawing! I love the compact whale and the variation of background blue hues. But ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Poetry Discussion Re: Fire and Ice

    I like this too. It was a mix of lightheartedness and darkness. It's some kind of beauty between two great opposites. Anyone agrees?

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Eternity

    I Like this, I really, really Like this. You're right about what you said, love is eternity. I think that you did greatly in this here poem because you made ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Science-Fiction Short Stories Re: The In-Laws

    Ha! The in-laws, huh? Wonder when I'd be getting one? About your story: the best thing that I liked is the concrete humor. It seems that you didn't actually try ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Trumpet Solo!

    A poem about music? Hmmm....Let's see. I like this! Really. Well the title is already great, why change it? I like slo-mo reads you know. And I think your poem ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: The Car

    Hiya! Vrrroooom! The car is a great poem! I love the creative word choice and everything! The first stanza was entertaining, colorful and imaginative! Then you continue it off with ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Suicidal Sorrow

    Greetings! I really like your name! It reminds me of cookies! I really like your poem. It tells some sort of story of spite and pain. I can feel the ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: Sleepless

    Hiya Tiny. *giggle* ...Tiny... *giggle* Okay, so about your endearing lyric. You astounded me because of the colorful theme you put in your work. Here's a more detailed critique: Content ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Other Re: Wishing on Stars, Praying for Miracles [1]

    Hi! I like stars! Well, I think you just did a great job here, dear. You made a short moment go long in a slo-mo type of effect, which really ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Photos of Stuff

    Hiya! I think these images are awesome! I especially like the rope thing since it seems both abstract and of minimalism. The peacock on the stairs is so professional, I ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • General Articles Re: A book that influenced me

    Hi Becca! In these kinds of articles, it's hard to make any critique because of the sincerity of your voice. I think, in here, you're not trying to make a ...

    Dec 17, 2011
  • Scripts Re: Five minute play.

    Hey, great work in this one! This is Al for your revue. Characters & Settings : :D :D :D :D You only have three characters in your play. This is ...

    Dec 17, 2011


Life is the art of drawing sufficient conclusions from insufficient premises.
— Samuel Butler