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Re: Unwritten
There're cats, now there're dogs, what kind of Pet Shop are they running here anyway? Hahaha kidding . Now, everyone has these writer's blocks y'know, and I'm proud to say ...
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Re: Books!!!!
For starters, I think you would read Gregory McGuire and Terry Pratchett books. Almost all of their works are based on magical worlds. They're not that scary but there are ...
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Re: Sun set
Hi Hudz, it's me again! Meow I like this piece as much as your literary ones. The first one was finely captures; the clouds were just perfect that moment and ...
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Re: Under the Sea
Hello! Oh, I mean, meeehh . I didn't realize your a sheep there! What an adorable drawing! I love the compact whale and the variation of background blue hues. But ...
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Re: Fire and Ice
I like this too. It was a mix of lightheartedness and darkness. It's some kind of beauty between two great opposites. Anyone agrees?
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Re: Eternity
I Like this, I really, really Like this. You're right about what you said, love is eternity. I think that you did greatly in this here poem because you made ...
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Re: The In-Laws
Ha! The in-laws, huh? Wonder when I'd be getting one? About your story: the best thing that I liked is the concrete humor. It seems that you didn't actually try ...
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Re: Trumpet Solo!
A poem about music? Hmmm....Let's see. I like this! Really. Well the title is already great, why change it? I like slo-mo reads you know. And I think your poem ...
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Re: The Car
Hiya! Vrrroooom! The car is a great poem! I love the creative word choice and everything! The first stanza was entertaining, colorful and imaginative! Then you continue it off with ...
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Re: Suicidal Sorrow
Greetings! I really like your name! It reminds me of cookies! I really like your poem. It tells some sort of story of spite and pain. I can feel the ...
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Re: Sleepless
Hiya Tiny. *giggle* ...Tiny... *giggle* Okay, so about your endearing lyric. You astounded me because of the colorful theme you put in your work. Here's a more detailed critique: Content ...
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Re: Wishing on Stars, Praying for Miracles [1]
Hi! I like stars! Well, I think you just did a great job here, dear. You made a short moment go long in a slo-mo type of effect, which really ...
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Re: Photos of Stuff
Hiya! I think these images are awesome! I especially like the rope thing since it seems both abstract and of minimalism. The peacock on the stairs is so professional, I ...
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Re: A book that influenced me
Hi Becca! In these kinds of articles, it's hard to make any critique because of the sincerity of your voice. I think, in here, you're not trying to make a ...
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Re: Five minute play.
Hey, great work in this one! This is Al for your revue. Characters & Settings : :D :D :D :D You only have three characters in your play. This is ...
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