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Re: Hope in the Midst of a Barren Season
Wow Mist! Great photos! I think this is a very astounding work of yours. There is emotion, highlights, perspective changes and dynamo in each photograph. The first one is a ...
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Re: Sweet Valentine
Hiya! It's me again! Al for my Quick Critique! Concept & Theme : :D :D :D :D :? You made a poem out of personal experience, but this cannot only ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Um...Hi there
Um...Hi there, too. Welcome to YWS! A community of young writer's in pursuit of excellence, development and social growth! I hope you enjoy yourself here, and may we be good ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: I'm Slightly New
Hello Quill, rewelcome to YWS! So about the pointing system here, I'll just send you a message about that! I hope we can be good pals! Good luck writing! :P
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: New-ish?
Hi London. Welcome *again* to YWS! I think it's very great that you "rediscovered" your account. The exact thin happened to me when I signed in at late Winter last ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hi everyone, welcome to YWS! I'm Alfred Symon. Just call me Al for short! It doesn't matter anyway, 'cause here at YWS, you can be as creative and expressive as ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Boxxy Is Love
There are many people who like to critique stuff, including me. I think that's what art is about: perspective over something unperceived. And I think a second opinion for other ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: To Be a Parent
Hiya, I don't give review in these types of articles since, well, it's because of the sincerity of the speakers. And I think you, Snowberry, is a lucky person. Well ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: The White Crow
Wow! A poem written in stone! Ooohh. Hi I'm Al, and since I love stones and oddly colored birds, I'll give your poem a review! Concept & Theme : :D ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Guiltless
Yes, we are liars, aren't we? Hiya, Al here! So your lyrics...they're great actually. Finely made. The strong language, although I don't believe in their purpose, still made an emotional ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: tv in the kitchen
TV!!!! THERE'S A TV FOR CHICKEN'S SAKE! Ok, ok, breathe, breathe. *inhale*, *exhale*. Ok! I'm fine now. Let me give you my Quick Critique! Concept & Theme : :D :D ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Her Invisible Sky
Hi Jackie! Al here for a Quick Critique! We all love our grandmothers don't we? We'll I for one do. When I talk to my gran-gran, I feel definitely at ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Wait 'til Time Sparks
Thanks everyone! This is one of my most favored poems, glad you liked it!
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: Another fighter girl...
Hi! I'll have a revue for 'Another Fighter Girl' Well yes, it is a fighter girl, huh? Why do many people like to draw fighter girls? But still, I can ...
Dec 17, 2011 -
Re: Stop and Stare
If the synopsis is this great, I think I'll take a look at this here novel...
Dec 17, 2011
