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AlfredSymon

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  • Other Poetry Re: Love turned to hate

    Oh, I simply LOVE HATE! Al here for a lovely but hateful Quick Critique! I think you did the poem very artistically because you combined different figurative speeches. You first ...

    Dec 19, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: A New Beginning

    Hi! This is Alfred Symon, giver of Quick Critiques and Kudos Revues! Nice to meet you! I'll send a Greeter Message to you in time! Welcome to YWS! Good luck ...

    Dec 19, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: The Painted Crow

    Wow! A change of heart, huh? I can see that from the cold words you put in the "White Crow", you added these colorful and creative words which made the ...

    Dec 19, 2011
  • Media Reviews Re: Micheal Crichton's Jurassic Park

    Hiya! This is Alfred, your Quick Critique! It's quite weird to give a revue about another review, so I'll just give my impression to your work! I've watched Jurassic Park ...

    Dec 19, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: F*** You Inspiration

    F*ck you inspiration! Because you inspired me to write this Quick Critique! Al, here, ready Freddy! Concept & Theme : :D :D :D :D The points given in theme shows ...

    Dec 19, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A "J" for "Joy"

    Hi, this is "A" for Al, giving a Quick Critique! Concept & Theme : :D :D :D :D I just don't understand it but, even though your poem is quite ...

    Dec 19, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Dear Mother

    IIINNNNNNSSSAAAANNIITTTYYY. Hahahaha! Blpblpblpblbpblblp :P (this is an onomatopoeia of the raspberry). Alfred here, still crazy! (: Hi Jackie! I simply love poems and stories which are based on lette

    Dec 19, 2011
  • Welcome Mat Re: Welcome New Members! [2]

    Of course! Just ask me anything! And if I don't know the answer, I know a lot of people who can! This is Alfred by the way, nice to meet ...

    Dec 18, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Sunset

    First attempt or not, this photo is absolutely fantastic! If this is natural and unedited, well kudos to you because it was very good. The scenic foreground took so much ...

    Dec 18, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Stanger

    Anime huh? I'm not much a fan of it, but I kinda like your work. 'Kinda' because it needs more color, more style, more etchy sketchies in the side. I ...

    Dec 18, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Trish

    At first, I though it was just darkness, and then when I scrolled it down a bit, this image came to me. It was a bit astonishing at first, but ...

    Dec 18, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: contrition in a-minor

    Hi Lumi, isn't it bright tonight! I like your work, Contrition in a-minor. I think this is because it was said in a very cool and handsome way. You didn't ...

    Dec 18, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Lucky Boy

    Heellooooo out there! Let me introduce myself, I'm Al, and I like giving Quick Critiques! Concept & Theme : :D :D :D :D Yup, there are a lot of lucky ...

    Dec 18, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Crystal Clear

    Hi Snick! It's Al again for a revue! Well I really love the overall concept of your work. I easily understood the theme it exemplifies and the message you want ...

    Dec 18, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Scary cat photo

    Is it neon glow or something. Al here, still not getting over the kitty, giving you a Kudos Revue. The photo seems great on its own but I think it ...

    Dec 18, 2011


Besides, if you want perfection, write a haiku. Anything longer is bound to have some passages that don't work as well as they might.
— Philip Pullman