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Re: Wonder Why 9/11
HI! Alfred here for a musical Kudos Revue! I simply adore your lyric, dear! It has this great sense that isn't about loving your partner, but loving each other in ...
Jan 21, 2012 -
Re: True Confessions of a Heartless Girl by Martha Brooks
BLAST! Y'know why I did that? Because you made a great opening line yourself! Hi! This is Alfred Symon, for a Kudos Revue! As I've said, a big WOW was ...
Jan 21, 2012 -
Re: Why Books Are Wonderful
A big " Hello! " to you! Books are wonderful! And so is reading! Whether we read old yellowed novels or environmentally published references, the wonder of the word will ...
Jan 21, 2012 -
Re: Addiction
Hi! Al here for a Quick Critique! Are you high? Well, because your poem is! And it's making me crazy! Clam down, calm down. Okay, now that I'm low again, ...
Jan 18, 2012 -
Re: Living Color
Hi! I never thought anyone would be drunk by writing! And so I took interest in reading this poem! Concept & Theme : :D :D :D :D I love the ...
Jan 15, 2012 -
Re: The Eye That Protects You Whilst Asleep
Reading this piece's title, I felt very uneasy. Having an eye with me when I sleep is very creepy...But that doesn't mean I won't give a Quick Critique! Concept & ...
Jan 9, 2012 -
Re: new to the site, here for writing support
Hi Sharry! This is Al, giving you a great warm welcome! I love using the word welcome, and so I put 7 here (try to count them ;) ) *Welcome* ...
Jan 9, 2012 -
Re: Trapped
Hi! I was trapped in my room, so I whiled my hour by reading your work! This is Al for a Quick Critique! Concept & Theme : :D :D :D ...
Jan 8, 2012 -
Re: A review on Chetan Bhagat; a writer and a youth icon wannabe
Hi Puck! So this is Alfred for a Kudos Review! It's quite hard to review a review, but I think that your review is worth my review ;) I've never ...
Jan 8, 2012 -
Re: No Easy Love
Hi Stargazer! The stars are great tonight, so I'll give a Kudos Revue! So I read this piece 'No Easy Love', and I sensed that it was a worthwhile topic ...
Jan 8, 2012 -
Re: Letting off steam...
Hi Emily! This is Al, not for a review, but to let out my steam too! Thank you, dear! A discussion about letting off steam! At first, when I saw ...
Jan 6, 2012 -
Re: The Next Arthur (for screen)- Prologue
Hi Mary, Alfred here for a Quick Critique! I really love reading fantasy, and this is my first time reviewing one, since, well, most scripts I read are romance. So ...
Jan 5, 2012 -
Re: I can't Stop Stopping!
Thank you Lily and Jabber! I'll consider your tips very well! I experience this a lot and therefore making your tips treasures! Thanks again! ;) - Al
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: Hello, and greetings.
Hi Malefica! This is Al giving you a warm welcome! Since you let us call you by any nickname, can I call you Kurkaudwncmxnapqweiulvjhyg? I think that's a great nickname! ...
Jan 4, 2012 -
Re: Hello
Hi Angel! I'm Alfred Symon! Let me give you a very warm welcome at YWS! *welcome* Sorry if you didn't feel any warmness in it, but it is very WARM! ...
Jan 4, 2012
