-
Re: Hello there
Hi Mr. Myth! A playwright, wow! Hey, any literary work is welcome here at YWS! Post anything and have it reviewed. Here at YWS, we aim to develop everyone's writing ...
Jan 29, 2012 -
Re: Revil - Chapter 1
Hey, I like it! Funny how things go from good to thrilling. Great twists, by the way! I simply love it! I can't stop waiting for the next!
Jan 28, 2012 -
Re: Cocaine and Grand Theft Auto (The game)
Yeah, I read the article. It was quite an eye-opener. I'm not much of a player but I think it's true. It's also greatly written. Kudos to the writer! :D
Jan 28, 2012 -
Re: Currently Untitled
HI Rachel! Yeah, I saw your warning, and I saw your F word. Lemme give a Kudos Revue for this one! Great lyrics! I detect the pattern here in the ...
Jan 28, 2012 -
Re: In The Eyes Of A Druid
Hello Emmy! Alfred here, for a Quick Critique! I love fantasy fiction, it seems...very fantastic! Anyways, here is my review of your work: Concept & Theme : :D :D :D ...
Jan 28, 2012 -
Re: Alfred Symon's Critic Clinic: Bringing Smiles since the 60's
:smt032 :smt032 :smt032 :smt032 :smt032 :smt032 :smt032 :smt032 Novels, short stories, poetry, lyrics, photos, scripts and essays! Everything is welcome at the Critic Clinic! :smt024 Have a piece you
Jan 28, 2012 -
Re: Hi everyone!!!
Hello! I simply love your name, Sunny! Glad to meet you her at YWS! Don't say you're a lesser writer! Everyone has a writing talent, it'd just take some moments ...
Jan 28, 2012 -
Re: I'm new here and excited about it!
Hi Amanda! Alfred here to give you a warm welcome! *hugs* ;) Wow! It seems that you're an achiever! Aircraft, songs, stories! You're talented, dear! I'm glad to see people ...
Jan 28, 2012 -
Re: Bonjour, Hola, Aloha
Hi Cumulus! I love cumulus clouds! And also new members of YWS! Welcome at the YWS community! It seems that you're a writer since childhood. A fantasy one. This gives ...
Jan 28, 2012 -
Re: Salutations and Greetings
Jello, Amaranth! Mmmm. Tastes sweet! A novelist, eh? Well here at YWS you can have them reviewed by the world's greatest young writer! (i.e. all of us members here, including ...
Jan 28, 2012 -
Re: Hi
Hi Kadmos! This is Al, your new pal! Welcome to YWS! About that 'worth' thing, well, all works worth something, and in here, we help you by increasing the value ...
Jan 28, 2012 -
Re: The Demon Dream
Hello! Alfred here for a comment on your post! First and most important of all, I think you got this post wrong, kind sir. This is for poetry. And your ...
Jan 27, 2012 -
Re: Review Trading Center
Dear, Serenity Your piece is now reviewed. I absolutely love it, by the way! From another traveler Hey everyone! Please critique my work, Amber Rise, an Alfred Dorn sonnet. Sorry ...
Jan 27, 2012 -
Re: Amber Rise
"Her" Chapter 3 Hello readers! Before reading the poem, I would like to tell you thank you for lending you're time into reading this piece. If ever you liked it, ...
Jan 27, 2012 -
Re: You Should Have Chosen A Good School
Hello, dear. Alfred here for an Editor's Note! I simply love reading magazine articles. They're in the middle of Newspaper-strict and Short Story-free. They're features, in other words. Before I ...
Jan 27, 2012
